Beyond…
farther on than…
more distant than…
beyond the horizon…
beyond the sea…
outside the understanding…
limits, or reach of; past…
beyond comprehension…
beyond endurance…
beyond help…
superior to…
surpassing…
above…
wise beyond all others…
more than…
in excess of…
over and above…
to stay beyond one’s welcome…would be easy to do… when presented with this view.
I wasn’t expecting the last line. Love your “wall paper.”
The last line…good or bad? Keep it or remove it? The post had been sitting in draft for weeks. It seemed to end abruptly, so I added the last line.
Absolutely keep it…it was a surprise and made me smile.
Great. Thanks for your input.
I like the last line, too! The poem had a serious tone to it and the line was an unexpected twist.
yes it was a twist beyond the expected…Cheers!